From 143a8c988c30164a3691b32e59f199b007b6d3b3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Barrett Ruth <br.barrettruth@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 30 Nov 2024 14:35:04 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] feat(about): revise about page

---
 about.html | 11 +++++++----
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/about.html b/about.html
index 01ba914..7ffff6b 100644
--- a/about.html
+++ b/about.html
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
             >.
           </p>
           <p>
-            I began working part-time with
+            I began working as a software engineer part-time with
             <a target="blank" href="https://gotransverse.com/">GoTransverse</a>
             in high school. After developing an interest in the
             financial/venture capital world , I transitioned to
@@ -57,9 +57,12 @@
             and spring of 2025.
           </p>
           <p>
-            I love open-source software. I am a passionate contributor to the
-            (Neo)Vim ecosystem and beyond&mdash;you can see my related
-            contributions on
+            I&apos;ve a developing interest in high-performance computing,
+            quantitative finance, and open-source software. I am also a
+            passionate contributor to the (Neo)Vim ecosystem and beyond&mdash.
+          </p>
+          <p>
+            You can see my related contributions on
             <a target="blank" href="https://github.com/barrett-ruth">GitHub</a>.
           </p>
         </article>